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已有 192 次阅读 2009-05-24 23:13My boss will go to taipei next Monday (tomorrow). For my colleagues is happy days coming, but it's busy days for me, because much more things need I do. such us presided over the meeting, organization of work and so on.
I am the general Competent in the company, but I haven't the high salary. I wanted to change a job last year, but the economic crisis coming, a lot of company was large-scale layoffs, so I gave up the mind of change job.
In the circumstance of economic crisis, I must work hard. I hope the economic crisis days go away. hope every day is better and better.
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For example, I think you should be able to realize that "taipei" should be "Taipei"; "my colleagues is happy" should be "...are happy"...
Examples? "About work" since it is a blog title, and not "about work". "Hope" / "Such" and not "hope" / "such" since they start sentences. You don't have many such mistakes, but you still have a few.
Other thoughts?
In the first paragraph, the second two sentences should be combined because the second sentence is a sentence fragment. I suggest "For my co-workers the coming days will be happy ones, but it will be busy for me. I have many things I need to do, such as presiding over meetings, organizing my work, and so on." I'm mainly trying to give you ideas on how I would say what you said. By the way, the word "colleagues" is ok here, but is fairly formal. Most of the time I call them co-workers. But "colleagues" is ok for a formal office setting or higher level professionals such as teachers, professors, lawyers, doctors, etc. A "camp slug" would never say "colleague". HA! You will have to dig hard to find a definition of "camp slug".
I don't know what a general Competent is. I would end that sentence with ". . . but I don't have the high salary to go with the job title.
"I wanted to change jobs last year" works well. After that I suggest ". . . but with the coming economic crisis many companies had large-scale layoffs, so I gave up the idea of a job change. For the word "coming" I might also use "looming" or "pending" or "emerging".
I would also say "With the economic crisis, I have to work hard. I hope the days of the economic crisis go away." or "I hope the economic crisis disappears." or "evaporates".
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Thank you for your encourage.
Examples? "About work" since it is a blog title, and not "about wo