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2已有 143 次阅读  2009-10-21 22:01   标签hobbies 
I like travelling. I live in a small county of Chongqing. I have been to Beijing, Shanghai, Chengdu, Guangzhou, Guilin,etc.
 
I think when travelling, I can enjoy the beautiful scenery, meet many people, taste different food and learn different customs.
Though there is no place like home, I enjoy the process of travelling. I like travelling by train, because the train goes forwards, while the trees, the hills or the houses outside the train are gradually disppear. I always wish that the train would keep going, not stoping. When I travel by air, to be honest, I am scared. I am afraid that the plane will crash.
 
I have never tried hiking, even though I admire those people who often travel on foot. I think hiking brings you closer to nature.
 
Now I am dreaming of two places, one is Tibet, the other is Europe. It is said that the sky is very clear and blue in Tibet, But its altitudes is so high that the air is too thin. I want to feel the various cultures in Europe.
 
One day, I think I will realize my dream.
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  • alandeng 2009-10-22 10:51
    Hei, are you in Chongqing?  We are in the same hometown, nice to meet you, i'm glad to know your hobby.  我们都是重庆仔儿!
  • alandeng 2009-10-22 10:51
    Hei, are you in Chongqing?  We are in the same hometown, nice to meet you, i'm glad to know your hobby.  我们都是重庆仔儿!
  • fling 2009-10-22 18:00
    Yeah, you are right. But I am not a 仔儿, I am a 女娃儿。Anyway nice to meet you!!
  • fling 2009-10-22 18:02
    You mean you are working or studying in Chongqing now.
  • sedgehead 2009-10-23 01:07
    Quick English hints.  (That is, I don't have time for a long reply!)

    >> and learn different custom.
    I would say "learn a differnent custom" or "learn different customs."  Choose one or the other!  HA!

    >>I enjoy the travelling process.
    I understand.  Better wording?  Choose one:
    "I enjoy traveling."
    "I enjoy the process of traveling."
    or even better
    "I enjoy act of traveling and moving from place to place itself."

    >>houses out of the train are gradually gone.
    "houses outside the train gradually disappear."

    >>I am afraid that the plane will fall down.
    "will crash."

    >>I admire those people who often go travelling on foot. I think hiking is more close to nature.
    Better: "I admire people who often travel on foot.  I think hiking brings you closer to nature."  The phrase "more closer" is considered poor grammar.

    >>I want to feel the multivariate cultures in Europe.
    "Multivariate" is a type of statistical analysis.  Outside that usage, it is rarely used.  Better?  ". . . the various cultures . . ."

    >>One day, I think I will realize my dream.
    I think you will too!
  • sedgehead 2009-10-23 01:07
    alandeng: Hei, are you in Chongqing?  We are in the same hometown, nice to meet you, i'm glad to know your hobby.  我们都是重庆仔儿!
    "I'm" is correct.
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