English corner 英语角 -
文章纠正专区(学习英语的进)
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original text:
There are some exciting changes in my life since I opened my English blog.
The first thing I usually do in the office every morning is to log on my English bolg. I get very pleased to read the comments about my diary. I will try my best to make my blog perfect!
Many people including some college students want to add me as their good friend by qq these days. The main topic we chat is how to learn English well. Sometimes I feel like I am a super star, the feeling is indeed great!
I had no interest in chatting with those who are younger than I ever before, as there is not likely anything interesting to chat between us, but now I changed my view. Chatting may involve something, such as sharing the happiness, sadness, experience and thoughts. I make sure we all benefit a lot from the chatting as long as we have a true heart.
English hints? I have more time than norbal. Don't know the word "norbal"? Its a joke from Mad Magazine in the 1960s! HA!
comment from sedgehead:
你说了: There are some exciting changes in my life since I opened my English blog.
我建议: There are some exciting changes in my life since I started writing my English blog.你说了: I will try my best to make my blog perfect!
我建议: You're doing excellent work so far!你说了: Many people including some college students want to add me as their good friend by qq these days.
我建议: . . . as a friend on qq recently. Hint: "these days" also works fine.你说了: I had no interest in chatting with those who are younger than I ever before,
我建议: "younger than me" is correct你说了: as there is not likely anything interesting to chat between us,
我建议: as there is not likely to be anything interesting to chat about when we chat,你说了: but now I changed my view.
我建议: but now I changed my point of view. (or "opinion")I've found that while traditional older folks hate computers and don't use the internet, some old time computer users like me do get on line regularly. I don't know many older Chinese folks who use computers! But I have several relatives who are older than myself who are on line every day! It must be "in our blood" as the saying goes (=something that relates to being related to them).





