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original text:joy from lifeA little daughter of boy friend's colleague, who is very lovely and sensible..I heard before, yesterday I heard a funny thing from her.
One day ,little girl said to her Dad:"Dad ,it is cold now,u should put on more clothes,right"
Dad saied:" right,thank u,and u too"
A little while later the little girl seems to remember something,she remembered to say to her father :"u also should take more shoes"
Dad said no words...so lovely girl..comment by sedgehead:>>A little daughter of boy friend's colleague,who
Please use a space after a comma.>>yesterday i heard one funny thing from her.
Use "I" and not "i". Also, we say "heard a funny thing." We would only say "one" if we wanted to emphasize that it was one and only one thing. For example: "You owe me two dollars but you only gave me one." "One dollar is enough for you." "I saw a snake." "I saw three snakes and one was poisonous." "I have a son; ok, I really have four sons, but I have only one daughter."
Do you understand this usage?>>One day ,liitle girl
Space after comma, not before.>>One while later,and the little girl seems remind something,
Better:
A little while later the little girl seems to remember something,>>she remain say to her father
"she remembered to say to her father
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