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One Afternoon

已有 184 次阅读  2009-09-15 17:25   标签One  Afternoon 

The weather in Changsha is not so hot these days. I decided to come to the Martyr Memorial Park for good health yesterday. It is the largest park in Changsha. Not only is it a place for memorial, tribute-paying and educational activities, but it also is a composite part of a landscape architecture with its uniqe spots.

 

I walked to the park with my husband after lunch. Entering from the West Gate, we could see the Martyr Monument which displayed the photographs and biographies of the famous martyrs in Hunan.  Walking along the path which is shadowed by various trees around the Martyr Monument, we came to a small forest.  With the smell of flowers and the twittering of birds, it is a good place to relax which attracted so many people. We sat on a bench and played cards.

 

Time flying. Evening was gradually advancing. We packed up and backed to home, ended this relaxing afternoon.
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  • sedgehead 2009-09-17 02:20
    In general, your English is very good. Here's how I'd word the last paragraph.  The rest is excellent!

    Time flew by. Evening gradually arrived. We packed up and went back home, and ended this relaxing afternoon.
    Most of my changes reflect the past tense of these past events.
  • julian 2009-09-17 11:32
    Yes, I enjoyed reading your blog. Thank you, I remember that park and I can still image the birds twittering and the forest...
  • groundnut 2009-09-18 09:52
    sedgehead: In general, your English is very good. Here's how I'd word the last paragraph.  The rest is excellent!

    Time flew by. Evening gradually arrived. We pa
    Thank you for your advice. I see why it should write in past tense.

    Time flew by. Evening gradually arrived. We packed up and went back home, and ended this relaxing evening.
  • groundnut 2009-09-18 10:02
    julian: Yes, I enjoyed reading your blog. Thank you, I remember that park and I can still image the birds twittering and the forest...
    Thanks. Ofen go home to have a look.
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