In my last blog I said I like music very much, so I plan to introduce 90 songs in ten days on my blog, 9 songs a day. I will write down my feelings about these songs and give you the link of them. You can listen to them and tell me how you feel about the music which I recommend.
I recieved all these 90 songs from a guy I met on the Internet. He is also very fond of music, and he gives me his favorite song list which he collected in few years. The funniest part is except giving these songs to me, he also tells a very romantic love story about them. So pay attention guys, I’m gonna tell you this music love story now!
A year ago, a handsome man met a pretty woman on the MSN, and they found they had met 6 years ago. Now they were back in touch again, but the woman now worked in London and the guy still lived in China. That makes them only can talk online. However, distance didn’t become the obstacle between them. This clever guy wanted to use music to win this woman’s heart. So he selected 100 beautiful songs to play to the woman he loves, every single song tells a kind of his feelings. That actually touched this woman’s heart. So when she was on vacation, she decided to go back home and met this man. However, when she went back, her parents had arranged a blind date for her. So she wanted the man to come home with her to meet her parents. But the man said you should go to the blind date, because the date your parents arranged was better than me. The woman was sad, so she went home and met with her arranged date. Actually, I know how this man felt. He loves this woman and he wants her living the best life she can have. He also thought if the woman was so sure about their feelings she would stay with him. But the woman thought if the man loved her that much, he would fight for her. So they passed through each other’s life for good now, then the sad man met me and told me all about his music love story. I listened to them one by one and honestly I was touched by them, too. So I want to share those songs to all of you in the next few days. They are very excellent music hope you like them.
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>>In last blog
That probably works well in Chinese （在最后的博客？）but I'd say "In my last blog. . . "
The rest of that paragraph is well written!
>>All these 90 songs from a guy I met on the Internet.
I would add wording to indicate "I received" somewhere in the sentence, or at the first of the sentence.
>>A year ago, a handsome man met a pretty woman on the MSN, and they found they had met 6 years ago.
Sounds like one of my brothers. He got married to her, then a few years later he split up with her and did the same thing all over again. As for the second wife, he got married to her, then a few years later he split up with her and did the same thing all over again. As for the third wife... well, we will have to await and see.
>>Now they were back in touch again,
How did you know!
>>she decided to back home and met this man.
The word "go" is missing!
>>However, when she backed home,
"went back"
>>her parents arranged a blind date for her.
Past tense: had arranged
>>But the man said you should come to the blind date,
In this case, we say "go" and note "come."
>>I was touched by them, too. So I want to share those songs to all of you
You didn't marry the man?
>>They are very excellent music hope you like them.
I'll be curious to see what songs they are and if I know any of them. I look forward to seeing the blogs.
English: "can't" works much better.
>>In last blog
That probably works well in Chinese （在最后的博客？）but I'd say "In my last blog. .
Those hints are very useful^^
We are just friends, and I think he is too good to be my type
Hope your brother's third marriage could have a bright future^^
and....wait for ur songs.