今天明天后天。

今天我很忙。早上我们用了 Skype有电话，我工作了在沃尔玛，然后我开车到我的家了.
>>>>>>今天我很忙.早上我们用Skype打了电话. 我在沃尔玛上完班后,就开车回家了.

明天（星期天）我有工作；后天也工作。星期二，星期三，和星期四没有很多工作。那个日我想写我的本书。
>>>>>明后天我都要上班.星期二到星期四我就不太忙了.那天我想继续写我的书.

后面一句话, 我不太懂你的意思.好像在说你做的一个梦,呵呵~~~
加油,进步蛮多的哦~~~~~

Philip, you are  so cute, I like what you written, just as me write english. but you have got much better than before. you are really good.

English hints:  1) remember the little things (see my blogs and lessons).  2) you have a "run on" sentence.  That is, it is too long.   3) use either "wrote" or "have written"

I suggestion: . . . cute.  I like what you wrote.  Just like me when I write English.  But you have become much better than before. . . .

The word "got" would be "gotten" here, but it is considered too informal for most writing.  When i was young, my English teachers would have said "don't use got in a written sentence."  They didn't want us to say it too!  It is considered poor English and too informal for educated people.

“星期二，星期三，和星期四”这一句中后面那个逗号一般是不用加的。您的中文真的很好了

谢谢你。

现在星期天二点晚。《《《现在是星期天凌晨两点或晚上两点。
我梦见了。《《《我做了一个梦。
在我的梦我开车我的卡车。《《《在梦里，我开着我的小型敞篷卡车。
在我的梦在滞留在泥。《《《卡车滞留在泥泞里了。
或者：在我的梦我开车我的卡车。是我的皮卡卡车。That is, it is my pickup truck.  在我的梦在滞留在泥。《《《在梦里我开的小型敞篷开车滞留在泥泞里了。
昨天下雨。《《《我想之所以会做这样的梦，可能与昨天下雨有关。

现在是星期天凌晨两点（或晚上两点）。半夜！我做了一个梦。在梦里，我开着我的小型敞篷卡车。卡车滞留在泥泞里了。
我想之所以会做这样的梦，可能与昨天下雨有关

呵呵你写的中文篇幅比以前长，而且内容也有很多进步哦。加油！

Thanks!  I can't easily read your suggestions, but the more I read the more I recognizes.

I think I know you what you want to express mean,but i hope you see my chinese translation.
今天我很忙，早上Skype来电话，我开始在沃尔玛工作，在这之后开车回家。明天（也就是星期日）我还要工作，后天也一样。只有周二至周四的工作少一点，我想我可以继续写我的书了。
现在是星期日，可能由于昨晚下雨的原因，昨晚我做了一个梦，梦到我开的皮卡车陷进泥里了。
Is it correct?

I'll take a look at it.  I'll need to spend some time thinking about it, because I have a hard time telling the difference between poorly written Chinese and well written Chinese!  I need the practice!

You have trouble  about between speaking and writing Chinese the same to me learning English. haha

Here's a revised version!  My thanks to those above who commented and Josh on Skype who also helped me!

Revised text:
今天我很忙。早上我们用了 Skype打了电话，我在沃尔玛上完班后, 就开车回家了.
明后天我都要上班。星期二三四没有太多活儿。那天我想继续写我的书。

现在我想说两件星期天晚上的事。半夜！我做了一个梦。在梦里，我开着我的皮卡。车陷在泥里。昨天下雨。

Original text:
今天我很忙。早上我们用了 Skype打了电话，我工作了在沃尔玛，然后我开车到我的家了。明天（星期天）我有工作；后天也工作。星期二，星期三，和星期四没有很多工作。那个日我想写我的本书。

现在星期天二点晚。半夜！我梦见了。在我的梦我开车我的卡车。是我的皮卡卡车。That is, it is my pickup truck.  在我的梦在滞留在泥。

昨天下雨。

English version from Phil:
Today I was very busy.  This morning we used Skype to have a phone call, I worked at Wal-mart, then I drove home.  Tomorrow (Sunday) I have to work; on the day after tomorrow I also have to work.  Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday I don’t have much work.  On that day I want to work on writing my book.

Now I want to say two things about Sunday night. In the middle of the night!  I had a dream.  In my dream I drove my truck.  That is, it is my pickup truck.  In my dream I was stuck in the mud.  Yesterday was rainy.

pH

I've posted a revised version based on your comments and comments from others.  See the original blog comments to see them!

I've posted a revised version based on your comments and comments from others.  See the original blog comments to see them!

I've posted a revised version based on your comments and comments from others.  See the original blog comments to see them!

I've posted a revised version based on your comments and comments from others.  See the original blog comments to see them!

I've posted a revised version based on your comments and comments from others.  See the original blog comments to see them!

Good job!

wow, 佩服，your Chinese is very well ,you can write in Chinese .

wow, 佩服，your Chinese is very well ,you can write in Chinese .